science+fiction+by+weijin

Close your eyes and imagine yourself on another planet or travelling through space (e.g. in a spaceship.) Write three things that you: See I saw flames and smoke coming out of my x-wing k52 and then a huge explosion of one of my twin engines. Hear    I could hear my x-wing k52 's engine ratling and then a huge explosion as I paracuted out of my x-wing k52 Smell smoke of the weckage o my ship. Write something happening in the first couple of lines in third person– something exciting is going to happening (elves getting up and disappearing, dancing) it does not have to be extreme, but it must get the story off with a hiss and a roar! Start in the middle of the story, ask the question, could I start further on in the story? Write long enough so that people want to read on, your main goal is to entice the reader to find out more.

16/10/08  what was that? whats that smell? why was there a explosion in the sky? where did it come from? zzeeoommmb the two fly-xk1 rocketted past!!! sambo rushed to off to the opposite direction of the fly-xk1. little blue men has already reached the scene, where was the suvivor? sambo asked, the blue men shook their head voilently. walt craft our writing 23/10/08 what was that? whats that smell? why was there a explosion in the sky? where did it come from? zzeeoommmb the two fly-xk1 rocketted past!!!

Sambo carried out his task of killing qurats from the forest to make medicence for his sick wife and children. And then Out of the corner of his eye he saw a bright flash,And next this was followed by a dull and loud thud. sambo looked around and saw smoke raising into the sky from the east side of the forest. "What was that horrific sound?" As he neared the site of the flash. And next the smell of smoke stained his throat with a metalic taste. Breathing got harder soon he was gasping for breath. The hutch opened... Sambo was trembling with terror! who was this alien type character thing?Sambo thought to himself then everything went black. And next he found himself on a soft bed he had never seen or felt before. Everything was quiet. the hum of strange machines worried him. the strange character walked in. Fear came over him. hello?said Ivan...

sambo looked around him, what was that! You can understand me? Of course I can replied Ivan said, with all this advanced technolgy. How did you survive? Where did you come from? Where are we? Now now one question at a time. I survived the crash because... I'm not surte actually it was like an invisable force broke the impact of the crash. I'm from planet earth about fourteen light years away. We are still on planet poluton we are inside your house. Wheres my wife demanded sambo angerily. and next.. just at that moment julen stepped in... Ahh my dear wife you had me worried how are you feelng? fantastic! never been better. and next a horn sounded heavy footsteps could be heard half a mile away. You better hide said sambo. Armodriods are blood thirsty warrior working for our king... who is your king? demanded Ivan our king is lord alvor another blood thirsty warrior but he has been crowned king ever since he ordered men to execute lord freator you better go said Sambo Poor fellow by now the footsteps cannot be heard. Where did they all go? Asked Ivan shhhhh!!!!! Said sambo they are in hiding…

In stories there are three “h’s” HANDS – always doing something with your hands HEAD – What they are thinking HEART – How they react to situations *Copy and paste your story underneath the first attempt (Use the rule off line in tools) and rewrite the same story with your character thinking or feeling something. “Oh no,” he thought. She was curious This is the end A shiver ran up his spine (don’t always need to tell the reader that they are scared). Remember that it’s important to have your character involved in action. ***Now is the time to write w** **hat is going to happen next? Copy and paste your beginning, leave a line and write "And then...". Look at the example below to see how to do it.**

Once upon a time there were three little pigs etc. And then...they were told to find somewhere else to live by their mum. And then...they went to the market, the first little pig bought some straw etc. And then... the first little pig made his house out of straw, the second little pig made his house out of sticks etc. And then a wolf came along a asked to be let in, the first little pig refused entry and the wolf blew his house in. And then the wolf went to the second little pigs house etc.


 * What is going to happen next?

And then…

Is this exciting? Is something more exciting happening? How is the story going to develop – all we have to do is ask “and then…” Focus on the main point of what is going to happen – write the main points so that you have an idea of where your story is going, don’t write in the dialogue etc.**

Hopefully you get the point! The most important thing is to make sure you write the main things that happen (leave all the flowery details out), what I don't want to see is - He fell down. And next...he got up. And next...he picked a flower. Think of a DVD and how it is split into scenes.


 * Next task is to decide what has happened to your character in order to change something, e.g. a characters thoughts and feelings can change. The characters have to change so the reader wants to get interested. Characters have lots of problems and things going on, e.g. brothers and sister relationships, school, mum and dad…The difference does not have to be great, even a subtle change is good.

What did your character think before?

What do they think afterwards?

Write a few points – what is going to be the major change to their thoughts, attitudes and feelings.

What sort of person was your character at the start of the story?

What sort of person is your character at the finish of the story?

What are the advantages of having you in the story? One is pretending writing about somebody- the writer is god. The character is a person who develops as** lose your eyes and imagine yourself on another planet or travelling through space (e.g. in a spaceship.) Write three things that you: See Hear Smell Write something happening in the first couple of lines in third person– something exciting is going to happening (elves getting up and disappearing, dancing) it does not have to be extreme, but it must get the story off with a hiss and a roar! Start in the middle of the story, ask the question, could I start further on in the story? Write long enough so that people want to read on, your main goal is to entice the reader to find out more. In stories there are three “h’s” HANDS – always doing something with your hands HEAD – What they are thinking HEART – How they react to situations *Copy and paste your story underneath the first attempt (Use the rule off line in tools) and rewrite the same story with your character thinking or feeling something. “Oh no,” he thought. She was curious This is the end A shiver ran up his spine (don’t always need to tell the reader that they are scared). Remember that it’s important to have your character involved in action. ***Now is the time to write w** **hat is going to happen next? Copy and paste your beginning, leave a line and write "And then...". Look at the example below to see how to do it.**

Once upon a time there were three little pigs etc. And then...they were told to find somewhere else to live by their mum. And then...they went to the market, the first little pig bought some straw etc. And then... the first little pig made his house out of straw, the second little pig made his house out of sticks etc. And then a wolf came along a asked to be let in, the first little pig refused entry and the wolf blew his house in. And then the wolf went to the second little pigs house etc.


 * What is going to happen next?

And then…

Is this exciting? Is something more exciting happening? How is the story going to develop – all we have to do is ask “and then…” Focus on the main point of what is going to happen – write the main points so that you have an idea of where your story is going, don’t write in the dialogue etc.**

Hopefully you get the point! The most important thing is to make sure you write the main things that happen (leave all the flowery details out), what I don't want to see is - He fell down. And next...he got up. And next...he picked a flower. Think of a DVD and how it is split into scenes.


 * Next task is to decide what has happened to your character in order to change something, e.g. a characters thoughts and feelings can change. The characters have to change so the reader wants to get interested. Characters have lots of problems and things going on, e.g. brothers and sister relationships, school, mum and dad…The difference does not have to be great, even a subtle change is good.

What did your character think before?

What do they think afterwards?

Write a few points – what is going to be the major change to their thoughts, attitudes and feelings.

What sort of person was your character at the start of the story?

What sort of person is your character at the finish of the story?

What are the advantages of having you in the story? One is pretending writing about somebody- the writer is god. The character is a person who develops as**