anthonys+space+story

rfeffefv Close your eyes and imagine yourself on another planet or travelling through space (e.g. in a spaceship.) Write three things that you: See i saw little aniamals as what it like first but as i closer and closer it was henare and his steping crew Hear i herd voice in the dicnies i scarmed who is there Smell it smellet like nothing ive ever smellet before it smallet rell nice as what i thout Write something happening in the first couple of lines in third person– something exciting is going to happening (elves getting up and disappearing, dancing) it does not have to be extreme, but it must get the story off with a hiss and a roar! Start in the middle of the story, ask the question, could I start further on in the story? Write long enough so that people want to read on, your main goal is to entice the reader to find out more.

The pressure valves were blowing steam. the air was thick and hot,crew men were gasping. a siren wailed,the ship was goin to crash !!!!! then there was a big bang crash HAVE WE LANDED YET i think we have where are we they take a glanet out the windo ohh no what have we done the ship was broki i ask is every one ok they all yell yes we take look out side thes wee tiney anamales come up to us they start biting us what should we do kick them i say we start running up the trees just intill they go away kool they yell wate i hare voices let go see what it is there was a factory where the were ELFS HELP we scram they look at us and said attck we run our hart 0ut then we lost then