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One minnit I was in bed then I was on sticks my dad told me not to push the buttin on my new wach but I didt lisin and now I am in a forist in front of me there was a creacher that had red eyes and black fur something jumped at me it looked like a kid but he had fur everywhere I smelt a horibil smell it made me almost faint and then he heard a crunch

17/9/08 One minnit I was in bed then I was on sticks my dad told me not to push the buttin on my new wach but I didt lisin and now I am in a forist in front of me there was a creacher that had red eyes and black fur something jumped at me it looked like a kid but he had fur everywhere I smelt a horibil smell it made me almost faint and then he heard a crunch i put my hand on the ground i wonderd what the sound was i saw a deid rat i feailt sad i must have killed ithe ran down the street he ran into his house in the middle of the road haff way down the street from where it should be he went in side he saw a girl screming at a kid he ran off the girl seaid what is youre name he seaid me the girl got out shot gun and went phicko and he went running and jumpt in a pond and did not

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