Science+Fiction+Story+By+ME!

Close your eyes and imagine yourself on another planet or travelling through space (e.g. in a spaceship.) Write three things that you: See ~ Stars ~ Brown Sand ~ Black Nothing ~ Planets ~ Flashes ~ Civilisation, metalic buildings Hear ~Bangs ~Rattles ~Silence ~ Breath Smell ~ Cold ~ New Metal

Write something happening in the first couple of lines in third person– something exciting is going to happening (elves getting up and disappearing, dancing) it does not have to be extreme, but it must get the story off with a hiss and a roar! Start in the middle of the story, ask the question, could I start further on in the story? Write long enough so that people want to read on, your main goal is to entice the reader to find out more. In stories there are three “h’s” HANDS – always doing something with your hands HEAD – What they are thinking HEART – How they react to situations *Copy and paste your story underneath the first attempt (Use the rule off line in tools) and rewrite the same story with your character thinking or feeling something. “Oh no,” he thought. She was curious This is the end A shiver ran up his spine (don’t always need to tell the reader that they are scared). Remember that it’s important to have your character involved in action. ***Now is the time to write w** **hat is going to happen next? Copy and paste your beginning, leave a line and write "And then...". Look at the example below to see how to do it.**

Once upon a time there were three little pigs etc. And then...they were told to find somewhere else to live by their mum. And then...they went to the market, the first little pig bought some straw etc. And then... the first little pig made his house out of straw, the second little pig made his house out of sticks etc. And then a wolf came along a asked to be let in, the first little pig refused entry and the wolf blew his house in. And then the wolf went to the second little pigs house etc.


 * What is going to happen next?

And then…

Is this exciting? Is something more exciting happening? How is the story going to develop – all we have to do is ask “and then…” Focus on the main point of what is going to happen – write the main points so that you have an idea of where your story is going, don’t write in the dialogue etc.**

Hopefully you get the point! The most important thing is to make sure you write the main things that happen (leave all the flowery details out), what I don't want to see is - He fell down. And next...he got up. And next...he picked a flower. Think of a DVD and how it is split into scenes.


 * Next task is to decide what has happened to your character in order to change something, e.g. a characters thoughts and feelings can change. The characters have to change so the reader wants to get interested. Characters have lots of problems and things going on, e.g. brothers and sister relationships, school, mum and dad…The difference does not have to be great, even a subtle change is good.

What did your character think before?

What do they think afterwards?

Write a few points – what is going to be the major change to their thoughts, attitudes and feelings.

What sort of person was your character at the start of the story?

What sort of person is your character at the finish of the story?

What are the advantages of having you in the story? One is pretending writing about somebody- the writer is god. The character is a person who develops as** ===

=== The colours were blasting past the windows. Eyes were watching but least did they know their eyes were not the only ones watching this magnificent aray of colours. Their mission was to search traces of life or civilisation, though they were doubtful they didn't know what lay ahead! There were theorys and thoughts being murmed through the space craft but there was one a theory almost to stupid to believe that these scientists were most interested in. Did the moon spin around? Well Earth does why cant other planets? But through the shriek of fear, danger, glee and many more, their questions were answered! There stood protuding through the dust floating past the window were metalic moon like buildings. She was scared her discovery so unlikely but yet so real. More questions now flew around the craft darting from one mouth to another.

His violet eyes gazed at the long and willing sky. A bright spark appeared glowing his blue skin to metalic colour. Puzzlement filled his face and his gaze became a stare. He stared and stared and stared. The glow grew closer and closer, closer still. His puzzlement turned to fear as he ran to his burrow, his small leather sack thumping at his hip.

The space ship was crashing it was being pulled, tossed and turned it was being thrown to the surface of this new strange planet. Fear wiped the faces of the passengers as the invisable force pulled it down. With a thump they stopped their craft now stranded on the unforgiving terrain.

The colours were blasting past the windows. Their eyes were watching but least did they know their eyes were not the only ones gazing at this magnificent aray of colours. Their mission was to search traces of life or civilisation, though they were doubtful they didn't know what lay ahead! There were theorys and thoughts being murmed through the space craft but there was one a theory almost to stupid to believe that these scientists were most interested in. Did the moon spin around? Well Earth does why cant other planets? But through the shriek of fear, danger, glee and many more, their questions were answered! There stood protuding through the dust floating past the window were metalic moon like buildings. She was scared her discovery so unlikely but yet so real. More questions now flew around the craft darting from one mouth to another.

His violet eyes gazed at the long and willing sky. A bright spark appeared glowing his blue skin to metalic colour. Puzzlement filled his face and his gaze became a stare. He stared and stared and stared. The glow grew closer and closer, closer still. His puzzlement turned to fear as he ran to his burrow, his small leather sack thumping at his hip.

The space ship was crashing it was being pulled, tossed and turned it was being thrown to the surface of this new strange planet. Fear wiped the faces of the passengers as the invisable force pulled it down. With a thump they stopped their craft now stranded on the unforgiving terrain.

His eyes were sore form the rising dust blowing into his burrow. He poked his small fragile head from the entrance. Strange shapes were grudging around in the dust murmurs rose throught the dust and it slowly settled. Jub was scared but something seamed to draw him to the mess. something made him appproach it, as though the new creatures were vunerable, defenceless. Like he was supposed to help.

The colors were blasting past the windows. The crew stopped dead in their tracks, watching the magnificent array, but, they were not the only ones gazing at this phenomenom. Their mission was to search traces of life or civilization, though they were doubtful they didn't know what lay ahead! There were theory’s and thoughts being murmured through the space craft but there was one theory almost to stupid to believe that these scientists were most interested in. Did the moon spin around? Well Earth does why can't other planets? But through the shriek of fear, danger, glee and many more, their questions were answered! There stood protruding through the dust floating past the window were metallic moon like buildings. She was scared her discovery so unlikely but yet so real. More questions now flew around the craft darting from one mouth to another.

His violet eyes gazed at the long and willing sky. A bright spark appeared glowing his blue skin to metallic colour. Puzzlement filled his face and his gaze became a stare. He stared and stared and stared. The glow grew closer and closer, closer still. His puzzlement turned to fear as he scampered to his burrow, his small leather sack thumping at his hip.

The space ship was crashing it was being pulled; tossed and turned it was being thrown to the surface of this new strange planet. Fear wiped the faces of the passenger. With a thump they stopped their craft now stranded on the unforgiving terrain.

His eyes were sore form the rising dust blowing into his burrow. He poked his small fragile head from the entrance. Strange shapes were grudging around disorted by the dust, murmurs rose through the dust as it slowly settled. Jub was scared but something seamed to draw him to the mess. Something made him approach it, as though the new creatures were vunerable, defenseless. Like he was supposed to help.

322 Words  The colours  were blasting past the windows. The crew stopped dead in their tracks, watching the magnificent array, but, they were not the only ones gazing at this phenomenon. Their mission was to search traces of life or civilization, though they were doubtful they didn't know what lay ahead! There were theory’s and thoughts being murmured through the space craft but there was one theory almost to stupid to believe that these scientists were most interested in. Did the moon spin around? Well Earth does why can't other planets? But through the shriek of fear, danger, glee and many more, their questions were answered! There stood protruding through the dust floating past the window were metallic moon like buildings. She was scared her discovery was so unlikely but it was real. More questions now flew around the craft darting from one mouth to another.

His violet eyes gazed at the long and willing sky. A bright spark appeared glowing  his blue skin to metallic colour. Puzzlement filled his face and his gaze became a stare. He stared and stared and stared. The glow grew closer and closer, closer still. His puzzlement turned to fear as he scampered to his burrow, his small leather sack thumping at his hip.

The space ship was crashing it was being pulled; tossed and turned it was being thrown to the surface of this new strange planet. Fear wiped the faces of the passenger. With a thump they stopped their craft now stranded on the unforgiving terrain.

His eyes were sore form the rising dust blowing into his burrow. He poked his small fragile head from the entrance. Strange shapes were grudging around disorted by the dust, murmurs rose through the dust as it slowly settled. Jub was scared but something seamed to draw him to the mess. Something made him approach it, as though the new creatures were venerable, defenseless. Like he was supposed to help. 

AND NEXT :) :) :)

They take off in ship. They see a new place. They get sucked towards the planet by a strong gravity force. They crash. Jub sees the crash.