crafted+our+writing+callum

the forest was dark and i was scared and i was trembling i looked to my right i saw a long windey path then i looked to my left i saw a dark castle the next thing i new i was being chaced i ran down the path and ended up at the top of a waterfall i turned around the thing that was chacing me was looking at me i thought to myself what is that thing? It had a long slimy body it looked right at me i steped bac suddenly i felt myself falling (splash) i came aboe the serface to see a circle of little thubby dwarf people looking at me

17/9/08 The forest was dark and i was scared and i was trembling i looked to my right i saw a long windey path then i looked to my left i saw a dark castle the next thing i new i was being chaced i ran down the path and ended up at the top of a waterfall i turned around the thing that was chacing me was looking at me i thought to myself what is that thing? It had a long slimy body it looked right at me i steped back suddenly i felt myself falling (splash) i came above the serface to see a circle of little thubby dwarf people looking at me i thought to myself what in the world just happend? one of the little dwarfs said oi you what u here for? i just replied i dotn really know i was chaced then i fell down this waterfall here. oh well what do you want? well i wouldent mind knowing how to get back up well we have a lift but its outa order you will hafe to climb the ladder "oh ok i put my hand onto the fifth rung and my feet on the second i climbed for about ten minutes just when i was about to get to the top i felt something prickle my hand gorse had grown on the top 5 rungs i climbed right through it when i got to the top i held my hands toward my face they were bleeding

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