Science+Fiction+By+Yazzy

Close your eyes and imagine yourself on another planet or travelling through space (e.g. in a spaceship.) Write three things that you: See ~The moon, brighter than ever. ~ Colours that changed every time you looked at them. ~Tall, and short buildings Hear ~Bangs ~laughter ~silence Smell  ~Flowers ~Dirt. ~Water

Write something happening in the first couple of lines in third person– something exciting is going to happening (elves getting up and disappearing, dancing) it does not have to be extreme, but it must get the story off with a hiss and a roar! Start in the middle of the story, ask the question, could I start further on in the story? Write long enough so that people want to read on, your main goal is to entice the reader to find out more. 

17~10~08 STORY 1 BANG!!! Her head hit the wall of the spaceship. Everybody heard her scream. The door opened, there it was the planet of Saturn. They all pushed and shoved to get out of the door first, so that whoever it was they were the FIRST EVER on Saturn. "OI" said the teacher loudley, Everyone went silent."Me first"As soon as he stepped foot on the planet all they could here was "woohoo, I'm first, me Me ME, Bob leithlerker is the first on Saturn. The class walked on to Saturn very annoyed at Mr leithlerker of his behavior. Lia left the group and started walking round realising that wierd sound of laughter, but she new it wasn't her class....

In stories there are three “h’s” HANDS – always doing something with your hands HEAD – What they are thinking HEART – How they react to situations *Copy and paste your story underneath the first attempt (Use the rule off line in tools) and rewrite the same story with your character thinking or feeling something. “Oh no,” he thought. She was curious This is the end A shiver ran up his spine (don’t always need to tell the reader that they are scared). Remember that it’s important to have your character involved in action. ***Now is the time to write w** **hat is going to happen next? Copy and paste your beginning, leave a line and write "And then...". Look at the example below to see how to do it.**

Once upon a time there were three little pigs etc. And then...they were told to find somewhere else to live by their mum. And then...they went to the market, the first little pig bought some straw etc. And then... the first little pig made his house out of straw, the second little pig made his house out of sticks etc. And then a wolf came along a asked to be let in, the first little pig refused entry and the wolf blew his house in. And then the wolf went to the second little pigs house etc.


 * What is going to happen next?

And then…

Is this exciting? Is something more exciting happening? How is the story going to develop – all we have to do is ask “and then…” Focus on the main point of what is going to happen – write the main points so that you have an idea of where your story is going, don’t write in the dialogue etc.**

Hopefully you get the point! The most important thing is to make sure you write the main things that happen (leave all the flowery details out), what I don't want to see is - He fell down. And next...he got up. And next...he picked a flower. Think of a DVD and how it is split into scenes.


 * Next task is to decide what has happened to your character in order to change something, e.g. a characters thoughts and feelings can change. The characters have to change so the reader wants to get interested. Characters have lots of problems and things going on, e.g. brothers and sister relationships, school, mum and dad…The difference does not have to be great, even a subtle change is good.

What did your character think before?

What do they think afterwards?

Write a few points – what is going to be the major change to their thoughts, attitudes and feelings.

What sort of person was your character at the start of the story?

What sort of person is your character at the finish of the story?

What are the advantages of having you in the story? One is pretending writing about somebody- the writer is god. The character is a person who develops as**

 17~10~08 STORY 1 BANG!!! Her head hit the wall. Everybody heard her scream. The door opened, there it was the planet of Saturn. They all pushed and shoved to get out of the door first, so that whoever it was they were the FIRST EVER on Saturn. "OI" said the teacher loudley, Everyone went silent."Me first"As soon as he stepped foot on the planet all they could here was "woohoo, I'm first, me Me ME, Bob leithlerker is the first on Saturn. The class walked on to Saturn very annoyed at Mr leithlerker of his behavior. Lia left the group and started walking round realising that wierd sound of laughter, but she new it wasn't her class....

22~10~08 STORY 1 (JUST BETTER) BANG!!! Her head hit the wall. Her scream echoed loudly through the space-ship. The door opened, there it was the planet of Saturn. They all pushed and shoved to get out of the door first, They all wanted to be FIRST EVER on Saturn. "OI" said the teacher loudley, Everyone went silent."Me first" As soon as he stepped foot on the planet all they could here was "woohoo, I'm first, go ME, Bob leithlerker is the first on Saturn. The class walked on to Saturn very annoyed at Mr leithlerker. Lia left the group and started walking round,she heard a wierd sound of laughter, but she new it wasn't her class....

Lia was horrified and ran back to the class as quick as ever. her friend Hannah couldn't understand her because she was talking at 20 miles per hour. Everybody went silent and stared at Lia. "What is wrong asked Mr Liethlerker, why are you talking so fast." "There, there was awierd noise so I, I ran." "Where was it." Whispered Mr Liethlerker. "Over there".

The class walked slowley to that wierd sound, and there it was a huge hole in the ground with two wierd creatures telling jokes, well thats what we thought. "Gleeble bleeble leeble sheeble???" "HU" said the class. "Oh your humans, oops" "WELL WELCOME TO SATURN CITY"


 * //AND NEXT 19~11~2008//**

Mr Liethlerkers class was on a spaceship to Saturn. AND NEXT It was a soft landing on Saturn, and the door opened silently. Everyone wanted to be first on saturn, but Mr Liethlerker was. Then Zoe left the class. AND NEXT Zoe ran back to the class. AND NEXT THe class found an alien who took them round saturn city. AND NEXT Mr liethlerker book a satel. (a hotel in there planet) AND NEXT The next day the strange Alien showed the around in a bubble. AND NEXT The class learnt how to do thebleeble dance. The song goes like this, Bleeble to the left and bleeble to the right if you go for to long you'll be hipnotized for the night. AND NEXT THe class went back to he satel. AND NEXT they all woke up as bleeble leeble aliens. they even spoke like them to.