Craft+our+writing+by+Sarah

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I woke up on a cold, Dirty, muddy ground When i looked up i saw the sun and the birds flying around the sky As i quickly stood up i paniced i didn't know where i was I heard the grass whistling, the pine trees creaking, and the birds cheeping above me in the tall trees

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17/09/08

I woke up on a cold, Dirty, mucky ground When i looked up i saw the sun and the birds flying around the sky As i quickly stood up i paniced i didn't know where i was i held my breath to hear what was going on around me i felt froozen I heard the grass whistling, the pine trees creaking, and the birds chirping above me in the tall trees