Crafting+My+Writing-Cory-C

I was lost. i lookeed around and something caught my eye like nothing before ,It was a forest i could smell the aniseed already, i was hungry very hungry and cold and i headed for the forest the second i entered i felt the warmth arising. i saw bunnies millions and millions of bunnies, if only i could catch one i said to myself. i licked my chops and dived like an athlete swimmer "got ya" i said.

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I was lost. i lookeed around and something caught my eye like nothing before ,It was a forest i could feel the, i was hungry very hungry and cold and i headed for the forest. it was getting laterin the afternoon. it turned dark my head turned cold my hands shook with it was strange very strange i thought to my self if only i could find my way home i thought. Then the worry of mum, losing me the worry her thinking i haven't had eany dinner. i started to worry about mums reaction to me been out in the wotwots